Post by [T a n g o] on Jun 23, 2009 11:23:22 GMT -8
[posted by serenity]
This is the proper way to post, so that the members will reply to your post, not confused or unsure of what to post:
+ Have the character(s) name(s) at the top of the post, centered or to the left or right. So that the members know what character(s) are being used and they don't have to read your post just to find out.
+ Your post must be in
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so it is all neat and in the middle of the post, not spread out.[/size][/blockquote]
+ And last of all, you must have this at the bottom of your post: words, so the staff members know you got to 200 words.
Below is an example of a post that would be nice.
{Terrance}
Terrance's large body swayed side to side as he took each step closer to the beach. He was on the street just about it. He could see all the two-leggers with their boards and towels, to lay in the warm sand and relax. He saw no dog catchers, that was a good thing, always a good thing. Unlike his sister Terrance didn't like tricking the dog catchers and giving them a chase. He liked to stay out of their way. His brown body was a little black for he spent some times rolling in the black dirt near a construction area. That's where he got separated from his sister.
Amabelle, his sister, was cornering a dog catcher and was about to signal Terrance to let go of the rope that would make the sand bag fall on top of the two-legger. Another dog catcher came up behind Amabelle and Terrance, being the good brother he is, let go of the rope and barked to warn her. The bag fell and missed the one below by an inch. Amabelle was warned just in time to jump out of the way and make the two dog catchers crash heads. They both got back up and one chased Amabelle and the other chased Terrance.
Terrance was on the sand now, some two-legger pups were pointing at him and crying, "I wanna pet the puppy!" but their mothers just held them. Terrance chuckled, he liked humans just not the ones that catch dogs, and kill them. His paws sunk into the sand enough to hid his paws completely. Looking up he saw a dog on the dock, he titled his head. No it wasn't Amabelle. She doesn't have a small body or brown fur, she is a large, bigger than Terrance, body and black and white fur. Terrance came up to the dock and was about to speak up when the dog bit a two-legger in the ankle and jumped on his back.
Terrance rolled his eyes, trouble maker. He didn't like dogs like that, always wanting trouble, just like his sister. He sighed and turned away to leave to find his sister but then he spotted a dog catcher and jumped back, landing inside the boat. It was rocking and tiping in all directions. He yelped and attempted to jump back on shore but he slipped and fell on his side. Slowly getting up the two-legger stepped on his tail and a fish flopped in front of him. With all the chaos happening, Terrance thouht it would never end. Jumping out of the boat and into the water he stepped on shore and shook off. Now the dog catcher was out of sight, but that didn't mean he doesn't see them.
Terrance looked around quickly and found himself slipping back into the water. Walking on shore more he turned to the boat and watched then he decided to help but who to help? The dog or the human? They both looked to need it. The human was shaking his leg to get the dogs death grip loose and the dog, well he looked to have a blast. Terrance shrugged and watched what would happen next, also keeping an eye out for the dog catcher and his sister.
words, 540